四级写作的注意事项、评分标准及范文(1)
文章出处： 发布时间：2006-07-09
1．达不到规定词数的要酌情扣1~5分。（注意：题目中所给的起始句、主题句、结束句，不计入所写字数。）
2． 规定为三段式的作文，只写一段为0~4分， 只写2段为0~9分。
3． 文不对题的、或只有孤立的几个词的、无法表达 思想 的为0分。
4． 从97年夏天开始，又有新规定，即：凡作文不到"6"分者，所差分数，从总卷面分中扣除；凡得"0"分者，全卷最多能得59分。
四级考试中写作的阅卷标准共分5等：2分、5分、8分、11分、14分。标准如下：
1． 2分--条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，但多数为严重错误。
2． 5分--基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的语言错误。
3． 8分--基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。
4． 11分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。
5． 14分--切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错误。
为了让考生心理有数，我这里提供一些就"Women in the Modern World"为题的范文。它的段落提纲如下：
1. Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today.____________
2. With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. ___________________
3. In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized.
___________________________
例1．
Women are playing an increasingl y important part in society today. Long age, women only did something in the kitchen or at home . Now many of them have serious jobs to serve for people. What men can do so can women.
With the changes in their social role, women’s position in the family has been improved as well. Today in the family, the wife often lots her husband to do something at home bat ago, only women did something. Men are foned of doing something at home.
In spite of these changes, the liberation of women has not been completely realized. Sometimes, the matter, the husband hitting has welf, often happened. In the factory the wonmen to as much as the men, but they are paid less than the men. Some people have not completely realized the liberation of women.
分数：2分。
例2．
Women are playing an increasingly important part in society today. In today, many women have a work. They worked as well as men playing an important part in factories. There are many women in government also. They lead other people country, and make out plans. There are many scientist slso. They event new things to improve our life.
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