１．先说说英文议论文，或者说是论说文的结构问题．
Peter希望大家首先建立一个三个结构段的概念，开头段，正文段，结尾段，这三段必不可少，开头是短小，吸引人，引领全文的要求，结尾要短促有力，总结深化主题，耐人寻味．正文段就是你表达自己的观点的地方，这里至少要分三个层次段，写三到四个你的观点的不同层次或方面，如果一个层次段有两个意群，可以再分成意群段，所以按Peter的观点，一篇好的TWE,至少要写５段才显得饱满．
２．再解释一下Peter反复说的＂文章语言的具体题目特性＂，Peter是赞成结构摸板，但强烈反对语言摸板的，特别是文章的开头，要体现出你所写的题目的特点和你自己的特点，而不是说你的开头别的题目也能用，即使要用语言摸板，也要和自己的主题联系起来，第一段一定要见到你的主题句，这样才能体现你specific来，这也是ETS的要求．
３．段落的结构．Peter发现大家的段落总结有头无尾，就是段末把话说完就没了，不能和段落的主题联系起来，其实段落就是微观的文章，段末的总结就是文章的结尾，千万不要少！
４．不要把观点的平衡和结尾混淆．有些问题我们可以采取平衡观点，但并不是说你论述观点平衡的那一段就是结尾，结尾要总结的是全文，深化全文的主题，如果觉得平衡了观点之后结尾没有什么可写的，Peter建议你们把主题可以扩展，扩展主题的地域和时域（周期延拓，呵呵．）
５．关于长句和复杂句．Peter改的三篇觉得中间那篇的句子还不错，其他的就缺乏句子的合理组合，长短句的结合一定要有，句式结构要疯狂的变化（有点极端，意思是你要拼命想着把句式写得灵活多样），Peter这里把AW的分析下放到这里，希望能帮助你们把句子写出多样性来．
（1）． 多用介词加动词的倒装句：Finally, a core curriculum would ensure that all schoolchildren are taught core values upon which any democratic society depends to thrive, and even survive--values such as tolerance of others with different viewpoints, and respect for others.
（2）． 主题句要写长写复杂：However, a common curriculum that is also an exclusive one would pose certain problems, which might outweigh the benefits, noted above.
（3）． 同样是介词提前，另外注意有问句在前，后边一定要回答：First of all, on what basis would certain course work be included or excluded, and who would be the final decision-maker? In all likelihood these decisions would be in the hands of federal legislators and regulators, who are likely to have their own quirky notions of what should and should not be taught to children--notions that may or may not reflect those of most communities, schools, or parents.
（4）． 多用倒装句，if 不要满篇都是：This problem would only be exacerbated were these decisions left exclusively to federal regulators.
以及：For example, were all politicians to fully disclose every personal foible, character flaw, and detail concerning personal life, few honest politicians would ever by elected.
（5）． 能用单词的地方不要用句子：Although this scenario might seem far-fetched, these sorts of concerns are being raised already at the state level.
（6）． 多用单词和短语的并列，即所谓的用多个意思相近的同一种属的词来说明同一含义：For the purpose of documenting temporal, spatial events and experiences, I agree that a video record is usually more accurate and more convincing than a written record.
（7）． 注意插入语的妙用：It is impossible for anyone, no matter how keen an observer and skilled a journalist, to recount ha complete and objective detail such events as the winning touchdown at the Super Bowl, a Ballanchine ballet, the Tournament of Roses Parade, or the scene at the intersection of Florence and Normandy streets during the 1992 Los Angeles riots.
（8）． 词组并列式的例子列举方式：Thus they can play a vital evidentiary role in legal proceedings--such as those involving robbery, drug trafficking, police misconduct, motor vehicle violations, and even malpractice in a hospital operating room. 共3页: 1 [2] [3] 下一页