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托福写作常见50个病句分析篇(4)
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  37. People should learn knowledge no matter how old they are.

  改进:People should learn no matter how old they are/ People are never too old to learn.

  38. No one knows all the things.

  改进: No one knows everything.

  39. I want to live in a quiet place to admire peaceful life.

  改进: I want to live in a quiet place to enjoy peaceful life.

  40. Each form ofshavingsfriends has its advantages.

  改进: Each way of choosing friends has its advantages.

  41. I was admitted to a key university for which few dared to sign up.

  改进: I was admitted to a key university to which few dared to apply.

  42. Luckily, he recognized an American professor.

  改进: Luckily, he knew an American professor.

  43. They will learn the bad habits.

  改进: They will develop bad habits.

  44. In this continued process, people make progress.

  改进: In this cycle, people make progress.

  45. Lastly, higher education is equal to higher salary.

  改进: Lastly, higher education means higher salary.

  46. By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for deficiency.

  改进: By making friends who are different from ourselves, we can make up for our shortcomings.

  47. A wrong decision will bring even worse fact.

  改进: A wrong decision will bring even worse result.

  48. You spend all your life to fulfill your willing.

  改进: You devote all your life to the fulfillment of your dream.

  49. Children should be taught disciplines insgroupsto avoid unnecessary lost.

  改进: Children should be taught discipline insgroupsto avoid unnecessary loss.

  50. I felt alone.

  改进: I felt lonely. 


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