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My name is XXX. I took part in the IELTS test(General training) on 25th May in your cenetr for the purpose of immigration. 0227 is my candidate number. I am writting to apply for the reassessment of my test results.
As a pre-requisites of profession assessment, I need to take a IELTS test and reach at least level 6 on all four components. However, my writting is only at level 5. I have been in Australia for one year and have published several papers in English. I think my English writting should have reached
at level 6. My poor score of writting maybe is due to my poor handwritting on the test paper. I will have lots of trouble if I wait for three month
for the next test. Therefore, I want my writing part to be remarked. Enclosed are my original test results and payment for this application.
Anyhelp from you will greatly be appreciated.
Regards.
XXX
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