A second solution is that the government has to have the responsibility for the old people s care. He can finance this with its tax incomes . Actually, this is the most democratic model since everybody gets as much money as he or she needs. . Unfortunately, as the present situation in our country shows, this solution seems not to work very well. The government can no longer afford supporting, all the old peoples.
Another way of solving this problems is to give back the responsibility to the individual. That means that everybody has to save money during their working life for the fine after their retirement .This seems to be had a very fair model because their will certainly exist people who can t afford to save part of their salary . In this case the government would have to care for them.
A last solution is to go back to the old model of the big family who cares for all their members . I don t think this is possible in our days society because the family structures have so much changed.
To sum up I have to admit that I can t find a really good solution for this problem.
All models have advantages and disadvantage .Certainly we have to think.

EXAMINER COMMENT
Band 8
This is a very well organized script which contains a lot of well supported arguments and analyses the topic from different angles. The ideas follow each other well and there is a very honest conclusion. The answer is easy to read .There are some areas where the expression is clumsy but this makes little difference to the overall flow of the answer. There are minor errors in spelling and structure.

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