关于雅思写作的典型错误观点(1)
文章出处： 发布时间：2006-07-09
最近雅思作文维持这一个显著的特点，意思难懂，争论的焦点难以把握。很多考生在考场上看了几个认识的单词，然后翻译成中文，加上自己的想象，就开始下笔。无论语言多好，也很难拿到及格的分数。把握一个题目争论之处，有的放矢，才能够保证文章切题，获得高分。笔者将分析最近的一些作文题目，然后用一些学生的观点做例子，以帮助广大考生以后更好更快地切题。
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Traffic and housing problems in major cities could be solved by moving large companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. Do you agree or disagree?
观点一： it might cost a lot when moving large companies and factories, since it will prove difficult to operate business in remote areas.
错误：是否容易做生意，带来经济效益并不能够解释是否应该将公司或者工厂移到市郊去。因为文章只在乎是否能够解决住房和交通问题，至于其中的经济得失不在文章讨论之列。
观点二：it is nearly impossible to move large companies and factories at once, for most of companies are large in size.
错误：能不能够将工厂和公司移到市郊也不在文章讨论范围。题目很明显已经作出一个假设，就是把公司和工厂搬到市郊是完全有可能的，目前所关注的是这个做法是否可以解决住房和交通问题。
观点三： sceneries are gorgeous at the countryside, and newcoming factories will injure the local environment.
是否影响当地环境造成污染并不重要。解决交通问题和解决污染问题没有任何关系，即便交通会产生污染问题！
Do you think old buildings should be broken down, and give place for modern buildings. How are the old buildings important in our society?
观点一： some old buildings attract multimillion tourists every year (such as the Great Wall), so to demolish it will mean a loss to the city where it is located.
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